Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Third Page!


 When morning came Elaine realized she was lying with her parents on the yellow grass. The world seemed black and cold. Elaine was alone except for two cows wrapped around her. It was Speckles and her mother, Misty. Elaine remembered what had happened last night and began to cry again. The fire in the barn had devoured the barn and the cows in flame. In that spot lay nothing but black grass and ash.
As Elaine rose to her feet she looked at the horrible scene around her and wished that it had been a dream. Snow started to fall and melted on Elaine’s face like a tear. Elaine stood there for about an hour, stunned into darkness. As she sat back down near speckles there was a thick white blanket of snow surrounding them. Even though the world was white it seemed so black.
Speckles stood up and shook the snow off of his spotty back, and then his mother did the same. Speckles nudged Elaine as if to explain she needed to do something about this. Elaine stood up and went inside. She picked up the old red wall phone and dialed nine one one.

“Nine one one what’s your emergency?” A kind voice called from the other end.
“Last night my mommy and daddy were shot. I need your help. Please come right now. I’m all alone except for my two cows and I’m afraid.”
“Oh! Sweetheart we’ll come as soon as possible. Now, do you know your address?”
Elaine told them her address and hung up the phone. “They said they would be here shortly speckles.” Elaine said as she stepped out the door.
Speckles mooed and went back to eating the yellow grass.
An ambulance and a couple police cars arrived just a few minutes after Elaine had made the call.
“Hello young lady. So tell me exactly what happened last night. Don’t be afraid to cry but don’t forget to tell me anything.” A kind man said as he stepped out of a police car and took Elaine’s shoulders into his hands. He had a blonde mustache with a hint of gray and had the same color hair with a huge bald spot in the middle.
“Well, I heard my cow mooing and ran outside. I went into the barn and grabbed him and his mom. The . . .
“Wait. You went into the fire?”The police man interrupted.
“Yes! I had to get my cow! Anyway I pulled and pulled but Speckles wouldn’t come out. His mom was already at the other side of me. Then that’s when it happened.” Elaine’s voice cracked. “I heard a gunshot go off and my daddy fell to the ground. Then I finally got Speckles to come and I heard four more gun shots. Then my mom tumbled down the steps. I lay there with them until morning.
“Alright sweetie, I think I have everything I need. Now your mommy and daddy are going to be buried in a few days. Would you like to come with me to the viewing and the funeral?”
“Yes I would be delighted to go with you.”
“You sound awfully cheerful for a girl that went through all that.”
“Mommy taught me good manners. Even when you feel down you should have a positive attitude and be kind. What should I call you?”
“You can call me Sergeant Berpeck.”
“How about Sergeant B. For short?”
“Sounds wonderful! Now Susan is going to help you load up lots of your stuff. Just the stuff you want or need and then you can come stay with me and my family for a while. Does that sound good?”
“Yes. If I forget something will I be able to come get it?”
“Of course! Go help Susan now.”
“Okay. Wait! Just one more thing, I’m not leaving here without my cows.”
“I thought you might say that. That’s perfectly under control. I have a barn we can just keep the cows in there. While you and Susan get your stuff I’m going to go get my horse trailer and my truck and then we can be off.
“Okay I’ll be out in a little while.”
“ Alright see you later.”
Elaine and Susan packed all her belongings and needs while other people gathered Elaine’s Christmas presents. They didn’t let her open any today because there was a surprise waiting for her tomorrow morning.


While Sergeant Berpeck or rather Bill was out he picked up a few presents for Elaine. Since he missed Christmas with his family they were already planning to have a Christmas tomorrow. He went home and explained the whole situation to his wife, and then she explained it to their two little girls. Bill had a daughter named Sara who was nine and another daughter, Jasmine who was seven the same age as Elaine. Barbara wrapped the present while bill hooked up the horse trailer. Then he was off to go pick up the new addition to the family.

Saturday, February 25, 2012

Second page




“Good night sweetie! Tomorrow is going to be a great Christmas.”
“It’s going to be the best one ever. Good night dad Good night mom.”
“Good night baby.” Elaine’s mom said as she shut the door.
Elaine woke to Speckles mooing loudly in the barn. She slipped off her covers and pulled her boots on from under her bed. As she walked down the hall toward the front door she grabbed her coat out of the closet. She walked out the door to see flames surrounding the barn. She was a little girl with a brave and big heart. She jumped bravely through the flames and ran into the barn. She found speckles at the end as she always was. She grabbed Speckles and her mom and ran out the other end of the barn. As she struggled to pull speckles through the flames her father ran out.
“Elaine!” He yelled as her mother stepped out on the front porch. Elaine’s father ran toward her. As he was running a gun shot off and her father fell to the ground.
“Daddy!” Elaine yelled as tears streamed down her face like a waterfall.
“Fredrick! Elaine! Come here, Come here! Her mom yelled. Tears were streaming down her face as well.
Three or four more gun shots went off. Then her mother fell and rolled down the porch.
“Mama! Don’t leave me! Stay here!” She yelled as she got speckles through the fire and her mom followed close behind. She ran up to her parents who were lying near each other. She wept with Speckles standing above her until day swallowed the night.

Thursday, February 23, 2012

It's finally here! :D




I’m Almost There

Chapter One


Little Elaine Taylor was an angel in disguise. Though her life was hard she would never take what she had for granted. Her life wasn’t hard to start out with actually it was quite perfect in Elaine’s big beautiful blue eyes. Before they moved here to Idaho they lived in London, England. They all have an English accent except for Elaine’s father.  She lived on a farm with her father and her mother. She was an only child. The farm was her playground, until people destroyed it.
“Where’s my little angel?”
“Oh papa I’m here, I’m here. Can we milk the cows today? Oh how I love to milk the cows. It’s my favorite chore! I like all of them though.
“Hello my dear.” Elaine’s father said as he set her on his shoulder. “ Of course we can milk the cows. It wouldn’t be the same if you weren’t here to help me.”
“Oh I wouldn’t miss it for the whole wide world daddy.”
“Alright let’s-
“Elaine put on a coat it’s December for crying out loud!”
“Yes mama. I’ll be back in a moment papa.” Elaine said as she wriggled down from her father’s shoulder.
“Alright Elaine I’ll be in the barn.”
When Elaine ran up to her front door she noticed a beautifully wrapped present sitting on her doorstep next to her feet. She tried to find a tag on it but there was none. Oh I’ll just leave it there mama can find it later. She thought to herself.
“Good girl.” Mrs. Taylor said as Elaine ran to the barn dressed in her warm winters coat.
Even though it was winter there wasn’t a single speck of snow on the ground.
“Papa I’m ready! Papa? Are you here?”
Boo!” Mr. Taylor yelled as he jumped out from behind a cow.
He scooped up Elaine as she giggled in the most delightful way a child could ever giggle.
“Can we go check on Speckles?”
“Sure why not.”
Speckle was Elaine’s cow. She was only a few months old. Elaine  loved that cow almost more than anything. If anything happened to speckles, Elaine would just fall apart. When they went in to check on speckles and his mom, speckles walked up to Elaine and lay down at her feet. Elaine giggled in delight as she knelt down next to her.
“I think she’s really warming up to you.”
“ Me too!”
“She’s a great cow.”
“Yes she is. Can we milk her mom right now?”
“How about I milk her mom while you play with Speckles. Does that sound good?”
“Perfect!”


Elaine Ran around the field with speckles until she got tired. When she did Speckles and her lay down in the weeds.
“I’m almost done milking the cows.”
“Coming.”
Elaine ran inside with Speckles. She led Speckles to his mom and then ran off to help her dad with the cows.